Friends forever she said we are
but then i said i miss ya much
in answer she said its hard to believe
cos its been s log since we last talked.
Time flies so a popular saying goes
but its effects on people cannot be undermined
oceans and elevations stand as a barrier
keeping people from seeing eachother
How was i to know how u felt?
i'm not a sorcerer at the very least
feelings are known only if spoken of
and this one a little difficult to detect
Misconceptions about my personality
am in a snort or am i an extrovert
too loud for comfort or just as should be
its not my fault that i am "liked by many"
But i cant deny the vacuum i feel
of loosing one so dear and special
years gone by and al so fast
wishing that things could be as they once were.
5 comments:
Lovely!
But I didn't understand the part the 4th paragraph played in the entire poem.
Geez...it's as if u poured out my feelings on paper (well, blogger). There's someone I haven't talked to in a very long while, this London-America barrier isn't working quite well...
hmm...
@nila the 4th paragraph talks about my own feelings, the others state our differences.
@jaycee,
i feel u on that the ains of growing up i guess. take care sha.
the third paragraph could be very true, atimes we expect others to understand our feelings without expressing them.
in as much as we expect sensitivity from others we should also learn to communicate what we expect of them .
@shola,
true talk. communication is teh key to success of any relationship.
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